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There was on I loaned my heart to.
Who led me on a trail so long.
But then she led me off a cliff, telling me
It wasnt something I did wrong..
Hanging onto a Branch of Hope,
Yelling for her to cast out her hand.
She turned her head, the branch broke loose.
And my fallen body was broken against The Land.

Laying Facedown in the dirt.
With too much confusion to breathe, or move, or blink;
I pondered on why she turned away.
Wondering How Much Deeper I would sink.

The Ground was cold.
My body-still..
And as all my senses failed,
my thoughts were that of an absent mind-
set forth from the betrayal..

Theres no returning to where we started.
Though she's someone I've always admired.
We remain friends; halfway parted..
And look at each other through a wall of fire.

I'd die Ten Times to sit beside her.
Or Twenty Times to make her laugh..
But she pretends she's a shattered window..

And doesnt think I can repair her broken glass...
©2007-2010 ~Engourdi
:iconengourdi:

Author's Comments

Just found it in one of my old notebooks.
Tell me what you think.

Those of you that know me know what its about..

and those of you that think you know me might think its about something else..

confused?

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:icongusgusgustus:
wow... dude....i love you. this is amazzzzzzzzzzing. im not joking. cuz i hate all your other stuff. HAHAHAHA. you know im kiddin' bra. call me tomorrow!

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the only secret i know, is that i know nothing
:iconbrownsuga303:
WOW this is amazing! I SO SO love it. I read it and know how you feel!! If only words could discribe exactly how great it is i would write them..but i don't think so. Seriously...I love things that people write that i'm like WOW i've felt! And to know others have too and can discribe it in such a way....bravo bravo.
:iconengourdi:
GUS!!!! Thank you!! My phone broke! call jason!! I'll call you when i figure this out.. Gimme a bit broseph.

--
You're alright
You come to me in times
You make me realize
I'm not the kindest guy
But I give give give give
I give what I can give
So just give give give give
Give me what you have dear

-black angels
:iconengourdi:
Thank you so much. I'm glad you like it. :)

--
You're alright
You come to me in times
You make me realize
I'm not the kindest guy
But I give give give give
I give what I can give
So just give give give give
Give me what you have dear

-black angels
:iconfallonsrights:
nice job donny! i realllly like this. :)

--
you spend your whole life looking for the adult that you are
and you spend the rest of your life looking for the child that you were.
:iconengourdi:
thank you livi!! :)

--
You're alright
You come to me in times
You make me realize
I'm not the kindest guy
But I give give give give
I give what I can give
So just give give give give
Give me what you have dear

-black angels

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